Estheryu color contest entry

Hi everybody this is my first anime coloring and i just wanted to know what everyone thinks.
and just so everyone knows i did not do the line art, it was done by and i just have to say that coloring comes out way better if there is awesome line work behind it... i am going to work on my lineart so i can color my pics better.

so as always just leave comments telling me what you like or especially what i need to to better.

This deviation is going to be entered in 's mini color contest... wish me luck and anyone can enter, just get the pics from his journal.

Lineart done by:

and coloring done by yours truly:

edit: and of course full view if you dont already.... everything is better in full view